Marlboro Smoke
Sit with me a while
on this cold concrete floor
Let me watch Marlboro smoke
and curly hair
stream across your moonlit face
Let me imprint this moment
on the insides of my eyelids
so that everytime i close my eyes
all i'll see is you
I'm starting to notice that within many of my poems there is this running theme of time. Of wanting to stop time, make it stand still, make a moment/a memory last forever. I realise that by painting a picture of a moment, you extract it from the mind, committing it to paper - in some ways allowing it to exist in the real forever (or as long as the paper lasts).
I'd like to create the image which is the subject of this poem, the way I see it in my memory, but also capturing the feeling of the moment. It might look something like this:
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